Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Week 8 Comments and Feedback

I think the feedback I have received has been pretty substantial. The comments seem to be thought out and it is clear that the people leaving comments on my stories have actually read them. I think the most useful comments have been the ones that follow the feedback styles that have been discussed for the class, WWW and TAG/Pretend. As for feedback out, I have also been trying to leave meaningful comments for other people. Again, I find that my comments seem best when I use one of the feedback styles mentioned above, though it is still difficult sometimes for me to find something to critique or question on someone else's writing. As for blog/introduction comments, I feel I have gotten to know the other people in the class a little bit, but not to a substantial degree. I am happy with my own introduction post as it is now. Looking forward, I wish to improve upon the frequency of my comments for others and also get better at leaving critiques/questions for them. 


(from cheezburger)
 
This is one of my favorite images from the feedback cats site. I like how positive it is and that it mentions the benefit that comes from feedback while being encouraging. 

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